Once upon a time,
in a time long ago,
a kid named Rufeo
broke his toe on his roofeo,
but don't fear,
the ninja's are here,
they will fix the toil and tears,
with axes and ponies and spears,
"haza!" they shout,
"tu-da!" another,
dancing in the streets.
To save a boy with broken toe
is indeed a good deed, agreed?
but what the ninja forget,
was so drastically that
the Pirates wanted their names called too.
So the men in bandanas
ran with their katana's,
to save another lost soul:
"Oh here ye come!" a maden did call
from the heights of an abandoned tower,
"Save me!" she cried, "save me oh Ninjas!"
but the pirates, they got to her first.
"Oh fer' madin' weez might not speek well,
weez might not speek fine,
but weez can rescue you! put our lives on da line!"
so they did just that,
and they went on with their attempt,
but at the top of the tower,
they then dropped their lady
headfirst down the cobble-stone building.
The pirates cursed,
they struck at the dirt,
"Oh damn," one said as they watched the falling lady,
"Shit... their goes our booty."
Author notes
I dont know... i get bored sometimes lol reckoned i could fix the war between ninjas and pirates... pirates are cooler but... they are butterfingers appariently lol
Comments
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Ninjas are more awesome
Very good :]
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nice.
but ninjas are wayyy cooler.
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ninjas always win in my book ......
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well... they kind of won lol
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Wow, that was a reall cool poem.
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this actually is like--- a fake poem kind, just a joke i guess but thjanks lol
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Oh my damn......lmao thats......wow.
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haha errr yeah thanks lol
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This is a fantastic poem... It really made me laugh and I Loved it. Wonderful way to lead up to the ending (if that makes any sense). Again, great poem
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Hell yes
Nice lead up to an excellent ending. You are a good writer Shawn, I don't care what you say in my guestbook
You might want to try keeping out unnecessary variables to your poems though, like Rufeo on the roofeo I would have just made the whole thing about that last joke, that was hilarious
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Haha err thanks lol I still think i'm a bad writer, but thanks anyway haha Ok, thanks for the advise and for reading this, im sure it was torture
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nuh-uh!! dude up there is right.. you really are a good writer. you know i never bother to read and comment poems anymore but i did for this one! because i love reading your poems.
it wasnt torture reading this- i truly enjoyed it
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hahahahahahahaha!
wow! great write Shawn! i really really enjoyed that! well done! i loved the rhyming
whoo!!
pirates ruuule!
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That's what I'm saying, i vote pirates, I just... hope I never have to depend on one to hold me up lol
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haha..me too but Captain Jack ruuuuuules though
he's awesome!
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