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A Tortuous Death

The mouths of their bodies are screaming,
The shine in their eyes is no longer gleaming.
Theres nowhere left for them to go,
And now their cries are starting to slow.

Engulfed in the fierce flames under the moonlight,
At the beginning of the night they tried to put up a fight.
Their worthless efforts were easily defeaten,
And their bodies were then brutally beaten.

With nowhere to run and nowhere to hide,
We bound them up and burned them alive.
We watched them suffer a tortuous death,
And heard the whisper of their very last breath.


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  • MJ Forgives
    November 7
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    This is a very good writing. I hope you do well in my contest and thanks for entering. Love and Peace!
    -Jess


  • Firequeen
    November 3
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    Thank you for this dark entry
    Keep the ink flowing
    fire


  • Blue-Rose Beauty gold member
    October 13
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    Wow, strong write. Thanks for entering.