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Bare

I can imagine
disrobing
removing the outer
layers that cover

one by one

until there is
nothing left to the imagination

then gracefully, hands raised
above my head

s t r e t c h i n g...into a slight arch
then diving
d
e
e
p
l
y

into clear blue pools
beside ragged cliffs
foam frothing

wearing nothing
but
my
bones.

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  • sultan gold member
    September 5

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    Satiating ...

    ... in imagery. The tension of form and freedom with human limitation (bones) is here; and, the former wins out ... nicely. Thank you, Sultan