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A little secret



Sometimes...
when you aren't looking
I will take your tears...
and ask God to make them roses


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  • findingurself.less gold member
    1 day ago
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    Quite possible one of the sweetest things I've ever read!


  • urban cowboy
    August 3

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    absolutely awesome...you took the classic metaphors and turned them into stunning beauty all within four lines. Excellent write my friend.


  • going nowhere
    August 1

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    im looking away right now...

    these have to be some of the most caring words with such a deep thoughtfulness to them... a tenderness that shines from your heart.
    i LOVE this... absolutely love it