Smiling and laughing
(albeit fake)
led to kissing and stroking
(in all but one place)
brought on desire down there
(almost more than he could take)
and even though they'd just met
(a party at a friend's place)
an alien thought crept in
((A rush and a push and she could be mine))
but he shoved it away
(he enjoyed the chase)
and kissed her more deeply
(a bit lacking in grace)
until his hands reached ther lap
(finally there, which base?)
and she retracted her tongue
(the first he'd felt in days)
gave him a look that said
((Honey, you can't hurry love))
Author notes
Prompt:
Song title;
"A rush and a push and the land is ours"
Other song titles used:
"You can't hurry love" by the Stray Cats
I don't feel like this is finished, but I am done for now...
A contest entry
- "I can't help quoting you, 'cause everything that you say rings true." (Song title prompts...) by george the 23rd.
2400 points, ended August 23, 22 entries
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Comments
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Very nice rhyme scheme to this piece, and a very interesting take on the prompt as well.
I also enjoyed the bonus Stray Cats song.
This write was easily read, and pulled me along until the end. Clever business.
THank you for entering my contest
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