Sorrow wraps my soul in frigid arms,
no light shines for me, the sun is gone,
leaving me alone on an arid plain
with only the black carrion eaters..
They call to each other with harsh voices,
telling all of the crippled, flightless
and broken creature in their mist..
They dive upon me in anticipation..
I have no heart to fight back,
life gave me true love then reneged,
took back that which we all crave,
I go to join with him again..
Author notes
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Comments
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there is so much pain within this piece that you've penned. life isn't always fair and I know that first hand, as I'm sure others do as well. this poem is filled with a deep and intensity that I have come to love about your writes. they have a deeper meaning and they hit close every time. There are two sides to love, the happy side and the side that hurts like non other. I hope someday the happy comes back and removes the pain that was caused so long ago.
Good luck
Kat
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This is deep and rich in words and I love the side photo. It looks like the sleepy hollow tree. Awesome write with a devastation felt through the whole thing you definitely have a heart to write...lol.
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aw sis a brilliant write for the image good luck inthe contestmaralisa
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"life gave me true love then reneged,
took back that which we all crave,"
Love that!! Nicely done
Good luck in the contest,
A~
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