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Five Star Being

I can't believe what I'm feeling
You're confusing me you five star being

Such a wonderful creature
I love all your powerful features

Catacombs of unknown
Mysteries yet to unearth
too scared to explore
Afraid of unimaginable hurt
I remain on your shores

I don't know what I'm feeling
You're confusing me you five star being

So I run and I hide
Taking comfort in the disguise
as a mountain called peace of mind

But you send out earthquakes
To make my world shake
To annihilate the pain of my heartache
And save me
Save me from this Beast they call Grief

I don't like what I'm feeling
I need rescuing you five star being

Such a powerful opposition
Not wanting to submit to you
Scary conceptualizations
Of falling in love with you


So I run and I hide
Seeking refuge in the disguise
In a facade called peace of mind
A barricade to my heaven within

But you send out earthquakes
To make my world shake
To annihilate the pain of my heartache
And save me
Save me from this Beast they call Grief

I stare up at my ceiling
I have no more feelings
Where are you my Five Star Being?

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