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Remorse

I felt the dizziness of it all
Remorse was gathering in my head
I felt like I should've done something
Before I left the Earth

But maybe I wasn't leaving at all
Maybe I was just going back home.

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7-27-09

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  • cookie-monster
    July 27
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    great job with this =] thank you for entering