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Discovery

Kiss mom and dad goodbye
Leaving on a journey of discovery
Searching for my place in life
I’ll travel the world
If that’s what I’m called to do
No stone will be left unturned
No valley untraveled
Fleeing I am not
Going home to the future me
I am



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Quote Prompt: "Perhaps I wasn't leaving at all. Perhaps I was just going home." -Andrew Niccol

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  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    July 29
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    This is pretty deep and something that I know so many of us
    dream of doing everyday. Following your heart and going out
    into the world on your own can be a very unpredictable time but,
    could also be the best thing that you ever did. It takes a lot to be
    able to say good-bye to all that you know and love. Great thoughts
    here and keep up the wonderful work!




    Jeremy0826

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