As the seasons pass
And the years flow by
I can't help to wonder
Why you said bye
Those words that I never wanted to hear
Coming out of those beautiful lips
That I love so dear
You were suppose to be the angel
That would guide me through this
Fearful night
But you left without a word
That is why every moon filled night
I look up at the sky and say why!
Why did you leave?
Why did this happen to me?
These are questions that will
Never receive an answer
But as the time passed
And the years flew by
My pain started to disappear
And my heart started to heal
As it is said
Time heals all pain
Author notes
to be honest i was just bored when i made this!
this will be my last poem for a good while
A contest entry
- contest by Midnight Breeze.
700 points, ended November 14, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think?
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that was really good i love that one
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Nice! Thanks for entering!
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awesome
good respect it -
i love it
thats how i felt about u
why??
did you say goodby i loved you and u wolked away from that
so thaxs for brakeing my hart
i thout you never would or could but udid so i guess i loved u but u never loved me texted me if u want i would like 2 tolk 2 u again i hope u want 2 tolk 2 me
ps that good -
WOW
Dude your amazing!
i love this !
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ohh this is good, great. loved it. red hurts my eyes but it kinda suited the pom lol. cool...
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wow havent red them ina while bt tht was gud!!
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Very heartfelt...simple and powerful. Nicely penned!
"You were suppose to be the angel
That would guide me through this
Fearful night
But you left without a word"
My favorite bit....
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That was so cool. I love all the emotion coming from it. ^-^
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very heartfelt and emoitional piece.... incredibly painful way to end a love you must have felt... loved it!!!
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hey
hi Kira really good I think it was one of ur best poems keep up the great work and continue making up poems I reelly enjoy them xoxoxoxoxoxo
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well i am glad that you enjoyed it but this is going to be my last one for a good while!
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As usual, a very lovely piece of ur heart...
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awesome!!!! but time does not always heal pain :-> my cousins screwed up my life and my trust and i havent forgiven them i tried... didnt work out though :-> all and all a very nice person i can picture the stars holding the answers to those questions. :-> very nice keep up the ice series i love them!!!!!!!!
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