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Haunting Images and the Past

I keep tripping over invisible vines
I can only tell what is now mine
Never what is gone
Never what is forgotten.

Weight added upon my heart
It hurts, the ruby rain shrouded with salt.
It stings, the emerald under my stance
The burn from the sky's eternal glance

Why did the angel just fall
Why did the demon answer my call?
What is the darkness across my face
Who is the young soul caged in my place?

I try to hold back onto these seams
My mind still grips onto my awakening dreams
I tell myself this is not confusion
I say it is only just an eerie delusion.

Now someone tell me
That this isn't all reality
As purity cuts drop, as a song bleeds
Onto the soft fantasy of my diary.

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  • DolceVito gold member
    August 9
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    Super cool piece; nicely done.


  • Sweet-Sins
    July 28

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    this is brilliant- i loved the words you chose- it's really good!!!
    Well Done !
    xxx

  • klause da mouse
    July 27

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    oh my god, that you feel this pain, your too young, to feel love slain, i see and feel your reaching, talk to me i'll give you no preaching