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Blisters of my life. (My friend and my unfinished song).

                            V1
Why do i see you staring at me in my own reflection?
All that your telling me is ugly lies.
Maybe your not exactly what i'm looking for.
Or maybe you just a blessing in disguise.

                          V2
Tell me something that i haven't figured out.
Something's getting underneath our skin.
Telling me that i'm not really what i seem.
Telling me that my life has been a dream.

                          C
What you said guiding me to come this far for you.
What you meant when you told me i was wrong for blaming you.
Now i see how to cope with all my fears, tearing us apart.
Now i hope you can see through the dust that finally cleared, to see the heart.

                        V3
Your secrets surrouding me with questions waiting to be recieved.
Words so confusing nobody knows the answers.
Figuring out that the world around's not clear enough for me.
I guess that seeing is not all it seems to be.

Well that is all my friend and i have so far but we will add more as we finish!

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  • Wow I love it! I can actually see myself seeing this Dargi! great job I cannot wait until you finishes it :] I love the song very much. Very emotional and powerful!


  • StickyNote5
    July 27
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    Hmmm. This is kinda good. I need to hear it first go. It would be a good poem just the way it is.