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I Miss You

I miss you
I need you
I can't live
Without you

I miss your hugs
I miss your kisses
You truely are
My dreams and wishes

I can't breath
Can't carry on
My heart dies
When you're gone

I miss your eyes
Miss your smile
I'd do anything
Just to hold you for a while

I miss your laugh
Miss your touch
My heart has fallen
I love you so much

I can't breath
Can't carry on
My heart dies
When you're gone

I miss you
I need you
I can't live
Without you

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    September 8

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    This was very sad

    Thinking back I think in my life I have had three that made me feel this way . Yet time heals all pain and one does move on for we must kiss a lot of frogs to find that once prince who never rises away


  • alexsauer
    August 15

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    I love the flow!!! girl you have some deep feelings...its crazy!


  • Heroesrox
    August 9

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    Aw. This is such a tender and heartfelt write! I thoroughly enjoyed the read and felt the emotions at play between the lines and words.

    Best wishes to you and I hope to see more from you soon. Thanks for the share!