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My Mommy<3

I know I don't know you,
But neither do these people.
My wings are stiff;
My neck is about to broken,
To watch me die,
It's like a billion Christmases to they.
Iwonder if they heard my cries.
I'm just a chick.
Nothing more.
Mommy, please tell them to stop.
My heart's racing.
These are my last seconds.
Mommy and daddy
I thank you for this life.

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This probably isn't that good. Sorry I tried. :/

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