In the darkness of the night
Can you hear that faint whisper?
-let me love you.-
It's only a moonless night;
Do you fear my voice?
-let me hold you.-
Let me make you shiver,
Take you to places in your mind
That only the shadows can find
-let me dirty you.-
Your words keep saying no,
But this body is crying for me
And your eyes hold onto mine
Beg me a little louder!
-let me own you.-
The shiver on your skin
Isn't from the fear you cry
I can taste the heat of your mind
Let me show you one more time...
-let me dominate you.-
And let me show you what I feel...
Author notes
My Muse wanted to get out, so I sad down and let my hands do the walking across the keyboard. This is what they created 
Tell me what you think
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Very good, I like when your Muse wants out, and when you just let it flow.
a very powerful peice, full of tension, and... I don't know something else I can't name right now... Strong words with a deep undertone.
Thanks for writing it, and keep up the good work
Love Lila
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Always glad when I give someone a reason to praise (but I'm not really that big headed).
Thanks for reading, love, and I'm glad you like it as much as I do.
And that hidden element is hidden to me as well, so we're both out in the dark on that one.
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This is really cool. I like how it's written and it flows very well. Keep up the good work.
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Thank you, thank you, thank you Very glad you like it, my friend
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