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on loss


Don't search for me
in the dust.
You will find me in the trees.

Don't weep for me,
in the rain.
I'll be sparkling on the seas.

Don't mourn for me,
on the ground.
I'll be singing in the breeze.

Don't hold sorrow,
in your heart.
I'm holding heaven's keys.


~*~

above
our heavy hearts
angels soar

~*~


brothers
even death could not break
their bond

~*~

their songs
echo
in our hearts

~*~

heavy hearts
keep us earthbound
while angels fly






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  • Evinde
    July 28

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    Just, wow. this is pretty amazing, I can't even decribe! designed to lift heavy hearts and make sense of the emptiness.

    ...while having incredible rhyme and rhythm
    great!