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I wish my mother was... you

Your like my best friend

But more like a mother

Your the one who cares

Your the one whos always there

Nothin like my mam

And comparing you both

I wish my mother was you

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  • i can tell from this your mom was never really there or was never a mom in your life

  • exellent

    this is really good i can totally relate you should make it longer though

  • I can really understand this, sometimes mothers just don't see what you really need or how you really feel, and other people understand so much better. Great write!
    Blessings,
    ~Michaela~

  • I can understand how you feel. sometimes someone understand me much better than my mom can.

    • yea, it's quite hard for me to understadn why my mum is the way she is with me at the moment. But an older friend is more understanding of me than my mum actually is. x thanks for your comment

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