Will I lose my dignity...
I know i can't be
everything you want
But i want to live
by my own rules
Will someone care...
I want to live for you
But thats hard to do
when my friends around me
control my feelings inside
Will I wake tomorow...
I make infinite mistakes
Making me someone else
than who i really am
From this Nightmare...
My old friends look at me and think
what have you done to yourself.
On the inside I say,
I want to be the person I was,
not what i've become..
so help me be who I really am
and turn this thing around..
What do you think? Be honest..
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"Will I lose my dignity
Will someone care
Will I wake tomorow...
From this Nightmare"
Nice rip off from rent there em. ok, on the 8th line you jumbled up my and by, you might want to swich them. and I do like the begining i was just messing with you.
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hey girl thanks for being honest and ya i love rent!! i like the way you redid it! thanks a lot!
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Just showing you diffrent ways to look at poetry
I love rent too! -
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can u hlep me think of another title for this
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Who I am is not who you see? or maybe just Internal strugle
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