Two teenagers, Ruby and Casey are on their way out to the pub, the GreenRacers - the most popular mens only club in the world. They are dressed in hot lingerie with their golden hair down and their big breasts up. Their lingerie is seethrough. As they enter the club, the manager stands by the door, and says " Whoa there, hold up, this is a mens club only!". Ruby slings open her coat to reveal her hot body and pushes the man against a wall. He starts moaning and opens his fly, all the time staring into Ruby's eye's, snogging, moaning and whispering in her ear about how beautiful she is. They both strip to their naked bodies,clutching each other and clamber their way up stairs, still snogging, moaning and panting. Meanwhile, Casey struts into the pub with the unnoticing men all sat around the bar. There are 10 of them in total. They are all talking loudly, untill the point where she strikes her 7inch stilletoe up on the bar. All the look at her foot in stunned silence, then in unison, look from her leg, to her vagina, to her breasts to her face. She says " Hello Boys. I've come for a little fun. Who's first?" . All the men start arguing with them about who is first to fuck her up, when she suddenly points to a hot blonde man in an open t-shirt with spiked up hair.She waggles her finger at him, and slips off her coat. All the men gasp, and they shout "Go Matt, go fuck her, go enjoy yourself!" Matt, the lucky man chosen by Casey, goes and pushes himself against her and runs his fingers down her body, to stop at her breasts, where he clutches, pinches, squeezes and licks." I think we better take this upstairs" Says Casey luringly. One of the men shout " Yeah Matt, Get a room!". So Casey and Matt clamber their way upstairs, both in their underwear, still pushed against each other,snogging to their hearts content. In Ruby's room with the manager, they are both on a bed. His dick is in her mouth, and she is riding it, sucking and biting hard. Then he pulls it out and slavers it all over her pretty little virgin face. Sperm goes everywhere. She pushes his head down below, so he licks past her breasts all the way down to her clitty, where he rubs hard and harshly with his fingers then starts to lick and bite. Then he sits up again and pushes his dick into her vagina. They start to jump and roll as he jumps her up. Then, Mike, the manager, puts his penis in her ass and jiggles it about, getting her ass real wet. As he slowly releases it, cum and sperm slide out of her ass hole. Mike then rubs and slaps his soaking wet penis all over her clitty. They both stay in each other for a whopping 10 minutes then both come back down in their underwear to the bar, where the men start screeching and whooping. One man asks " Fuck Mike! Since when was this a Women and Men pub?" Mike replied " It never was, never has and it never will be. But women are always welcome when all they have in their mind is fucking me!". They all laugh and sit down to 10 glasses of lager. Meanwhile, in Casey's room, they are naked and Matt has his fingers up her while Casey is chewing hers hottly. He turns her over and slides his dick in and out of her real fastthen they slide back over the right way and jump each other up. He licks her tits. She chews his penis.He licks and rubs her clitty. They snog and roll, the finally come back down to the pub where Ruby and Casey leave stating that they will be back next week for new men.
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As a writer and fan of erotica, this has some serious potential to be a great story. I think it is in need of revision though. Not the story itself so much, but the structure. There are some spelling errors that are easily correctable. But my real advice would be if you want to write stories, then you need to create paragraphs. When a scenario changes, it needs to be a new paragraph. When you have a story written as on long paragraph such as this, people tend to lose interest easier for the simple fact that they can get lost on ideas. Just my opinion.
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