Love
does not have
Truth,
nor does it have
Lies.
Our deception is our
Doubt;
Our eyes so blinded to the
Beauty.
We're rushing so fast
to the
End,
when Love is
Everlasting. . .
Author notes
This was one of those, "I write the first word and in the next moment, the rest of them were already down"
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Comments
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The poem seems short and I thought it was going to be choppy because of the length of the lines. But it turned out into a smooth, excellent work of art. I love how love is defined here, especially at the ending.
Very wonderful! ^-^
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This does speak alot of truths i feel. Loving the structure to it too, it lends extra significance to the words in a really powerful way
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i like your method for writing...and i like that you shared it in your authora notes! great job poet! keep that ink flowing!! peace and light, kp
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