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Seeking Truth



Fake promises for
Deluded minds
Making up for
Illusional truths
What lies beyond
Their irrational thinking
Only they can fathom
Searching for some semblance of belonging
Or for just a way to co-exist
In this world of treachery
Trying to comprehend
What lives in their souls
If in their heart of hearts
They are what they believe to be
Forever seeking the unknown




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-shrugs- Fuck if i know

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  • JToddUnderhill
    November 2

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    Hmmm

    ..... Interesting write leads one to think about their own journey and where they are heading or what truth they are searching for Bravo! Well Done!


  • dark tigress
    August 4

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    wouldn't be human if we didn't seek for the unknown its our nature to have friends our nature to find truth sometimes through science well i guess mainly since they still can't proove the paranormal but great write keep it up and look for ur own truth in life as others do themselves. i know i keep seeking truth bout me and wat not and well continue doing so. thanks for the write


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    July 27

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    Oh gawd roflmao @ your AN there well good news I guess I am sane because your poem didn't come to life on me though it looked like a witch's hat and it was flipped updisde down as if being reflected on a fine body of water but yea okay im not sane LOL. okay so yeah love your write as always really like the feel to the poem and your good choice of words as well. any ways nice work all round and keep up the nice bang up work Moi