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Happy Time Haiku

warm family meet --

tea, talk, food, games 

enjoy happy time 

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We just had one of these "happy times" this past weekend -- the physical and emotional sensations were wonderful!
(Revised for better match with Prompt July 29, PM.)

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Aren't family get-togethers neat?

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  • Lady Altheia
    August 9

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    Hoodwinked 133

    Tea times are always nice to have with family and friends. We don't really have a tea time in the States. You have been hoodwinked today because someone cared about you.


  • Dragonbabyx3
    August 8

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    HOOD-WINKED!!!!

    such a beautiful haiku! I love family time, there is such a warm feeling that is associated with it, and you have penned it beautifully here!


  • BluesMan gold member
    August 6
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    HOODWINKED !

    It's true the simplist things in life, always bring the most joy.
    A wonderfull heartwarming Ku

  • judmc
    August 6
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    HOODWINKED ! !

    Quite a good example of minimalistic poetry of maximum impact minimum
    narration Good Luck and Best Wishes...George

  • HOODWINKED !

    So true, Happy times require effort planning and arrainging but well worth the effort for good times and cherished memories. Thanks for sharing this thoughtful 'Ku, best of luck in the contest.

    You have been Hoodwinked today by your Poetic Bandit Family because WE CARE! Glad you are feeling better!

    Brother Dennis


  • azure85 gold member
    August 2

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    Ah, that is what get-togethers are for-family and love, the best of what there is in the world. A delightful haiku, made me smile. Thank you so much.


  • Summer52
    July 28
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    Indeed... get together party, especially with family is something we enjoy best.
    Good luck in the contest, Rand.


  • abuyi
    July 27
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    i forgot


  • abuyi
    July 27
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    yup happy times.. mine to come
    wish you luck for the contest


  • crivanea silver member
    July 27

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    lol! such a contrast to the previous haiku! and you do give such a warm and fuzzy feeling with this one I guess that's what happen when warm family meet..although it will prob be coffee in my house best wishes in the contest


  • Rose Angel gold member
    July 27

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    Lovely write...Nice to see happy times as you get together, bro....May those times be more frequent now...and as you get better!


  • rbruce gold member
    July 27
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    Lovely things are family get togethers. Great haiku my friend. Says it all.

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