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Irreversible Conclusion

"Poets are shameless with their experiences: they exploit them." -Friedrich Nietzsche




...And wordless phrases pondered
within themselves- lingering discrepancies
transgressed amongst the 'Ton'; becoming
strangulated imaginings.


Leaving behind paraphrased limitations,
lines of "And here 'I' was there" without
beveled etchings on concreted secretions...



Whereas steam-filled decisions became past
tensed antiques of formerized glory;
and half painted memories sketched
itself into correlated subqueries, leaving
behind tidings of insufficient return.

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  • This is so gorgeous and full of a true poetry spirit.


  • white stone silver member
    July 27
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    True true. You captured what he was saying well. Haven't talked to you in a long time. Glad you entered my contest.


    • B Chandler
      July 27
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      Yeah..it has been awhile ...my rusty ol' brain still works sometimes