Tea without taste
Fingertips without feeling
Season in pain
Author notes
Some of my current physical sensations manifested this 'Ku!
A contest entry
- Tea Ku' by azure85.
1750 points, ended August 8, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Do you have any any painful feelings or sensations?
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Hoodwinked 133
Hmmm, I think I like the other ku better. Good luck to you in the contest. You have been hoodwinked today because someone cared about you.
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Hoodwinked!
Dear haiku genius bro...I am glad I read this tonight..Very moving ku,,,My thoughts and prayers are with you...
sis 
..Thank you for sharing and helping us to realize your pain.We need to know..
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Hood-Wink!
How come the last line isn't bolded with the rest? Not that there is something wrong with that ... just wondering
Reading this reminded me of my Godmother who died from cancer after battling for nearly 10 years, she'd sit with me and pretend the tea or coffee had taste so I wouldn't worry so much [didn't work cause I always worried]. This holds alot of power within its lines and is poetically heartbreaking
♥
Stay safe
~Manda
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HOODWINKED
Oh I can so identify with this. Two hip replacements this year and next week I'll be walking like Howdy Dudedy after my Hernia operation. Ouch !
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oh my oh my oh my
this is a many leveled ku, I have missed you, great ku
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A very deep haiku that expresses many meanings and makes the reader think alot. A very good take on the prompt, thank you so much!
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ohhh!! now that's sensation wow..I got such a mixed of feelings from reading this..the first line does such an excellent job setting off the prompt...and the last two lines are so personal and well done...impressive poet..the season in pain..great haunting line..
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