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[ the beast tamed ]

the beast tamed
the shoe was found
the eyes fluttered
and tail unbound

your love is out there
just waiting to dance with you

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  • Dreams of Isabella
    November 4

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    This is probably the first time that I can truly say that I don't know what to say. lol. I know that I enjoyed the poem, don't get me wrong about that, I'm just not sure exactly what my response is to it, you know what I mean. I have to think a moment................
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    yes, yes. thoroughly ejoyed it! I had to read it a few more times. Which is, I suppose, a good thing. I can completely relate to it, too, especially of late!

    Sorry about my antics, by the way. I'm not quite as crazy as I sound!


  • Purple Eyes
    October 16
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    so lets dance two three one two three
    round we go two three one two three

    never let go of that fairy tale