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Wheat



Beige rows bent,
to afternoons' soft breath
on her tweed coat




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Prompt: Wheat
haiku

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  • penman gold member
    August 3
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and so well done. And congratulations on the bronze.


  • individuality gold member
    August 3

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    a good piece of poetry, ah the dance of nature, and the songs blown in imagery, the wheat whistles tunes as the breeze catches colour and motion is found on the ground, alive, reaching for the sky.


  • Malabu
    July 31

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    love your ku
    what came to my mind reading yours

    Beige rows bent,
    in afternoons' soft breath
    her tweed coat slopes
    congrates on the bronze...your moving up girl yeay!


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    July 30

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    Liked the words 'tweed coat'.

    Overall nicely penned and congrats!


  • crivanea
    July 29

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    ohhh!! this is so lovely!! I love this! now here's one that's different! I love how you personify the wheat..,well done! and I sigh when I read "afternoons' soft breath" great appeal to the senses..well done!

  • Bruce silver member
    July 27
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    I like this! It's very evocative.

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