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To My Dearest Friend - Christine (My Sis)

A true friendship, unexpected
Innocently found on-line
Together we shared experiences
We think as if in one mind

Hardships we have suffered
Our circumstances very much the same
All due to the actions of others
We understand & console each others pain

You have coloured my darkened pathway
In you I have found the most precious gift
Showing me a love, friendship & honesty
I thought could only be a myth

In body we may be oceans apart
Yet you feel so near
Our spirits connected
Blessed I am, to have a friend so dear.

Author notes

~ This is written for My Dearest friend, Whom means the world to me.....
She is an amazing person & is also a very talented poet :AzDiamondGirl Check out some of her pieces... You won't be disappointed....

LOVE YA Sis
~Tracey~
Written March 27th, 2004

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  • mumma
    January 26, 2006
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    this is such a beautiful poem


  • Blondita
    August 30, 2004
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    It seems like forever since I last visited your page Tracey. I love these kind of tributes where people are able to express their deeper emotions. Friends like this are few and far between - and add so much colour to the world. Left me with a smile.

    Hope all is okay.

    ~ Sonia ~ X


  • Sara Bellem
    August 11, 2004
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    Take Care

    This is awesome! I haven't read or heard from you in awhile so I wanted to come by & say "Hey!" I hope you are doing well This piece here just shows how much of a caring soul & creative mind that you have. touching piece, hope to read a new write from you soon Take Care ---Sara

  • chatterbox005
    June 11, 2004
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    very good write tracey i love this poem i havent got to write any lately because of school but i plan to write more soon when i getused to being out im going to post a contest soon u should enter it it would be good because your a great poet im sure u would win but i guess ill read some more and then see where that gets me ok keep up the good work your a great great poet


    write on

    hannah

  • Son Of Sun
    April 22, 2004
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    I can see an excellent piece here, I can see the great meanings of friendship on the third stanza, it's one of the best poems about friendship.

  • Dali
    April 1, 2004
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    OMG...that was one of the most beautiful poems Tracey...I'm so glad you have found someone and she found you...it's truely special. Don't loose sight of each other it's amazing how friends can help one another. Well done..fly girl...DALI


  • AzDiamondGirl
    March 27, 2004
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    How so very true
    that I connected with you.
    We have a bond that will never be taken.
    I love you just as God put us here to do.
    Thank You Tracey, you have been such a big blessing in my life and I am just so honored to have you.
    You Friend Til The End
    ~Christine~

    Edited on Mar 27, 2:31 p.m. because 'forgot signature'.


  • forever changed
    March 27, 2004
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    awwwwwwwwwww,lovely write xx

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