Sculpting sand
The sun glistens on the aging dirt
Making it sparkle like diamonds
I see a hemp plant, and decorate my castle
All this combined makes me feel like a kid at Christmas
With nothing but candy
The wave defies my castle
Leaving it bare
My mood goes down the drain
I hike up the hill in the distance
And smell the sweet scent of pine trees
And I feel much better
Once more
Author notes
7-26-09
sand, hemp, sculpt, defiance, bare, mood, diamond, aging, candy, Christmas, hill, scent
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this is beautiful!
you brought my words to life in my style too!
i love the simple story.
its very pretty and calming.
nice write :]
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