So much going on,
in this head of mine.
So many questions,
so little time.
Many complex thoughts,
moving 100 miles an hour.
Just wish they'd slow down,
so I could make sense of them.
At times I just want to cry,
others I want to scream,
but I can't do anything.
Except sit and think.
Even thinking is pointless,
at lease nowadays.
It's not like I am short on thoughts,
there's just too many to sort through!
I'm not even sure words could describe,
just how I am feeling.
It's a mixture of so many emotions,
I can't even list them all!
So much going on,
in this head of mine.
So many questions,
so little time.
A contest entry
- for my favorites only---ok now its for everyone by Shelby K.
800 points, ended August 26, 78 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
This is still in the draft stage so constructive criticism is appreciated :)
Comments
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i can totally relate i have always had all these thoughts in my head i think about a lot of things some of them dont even matter i wouldn't change anything about this poem thank you for sharing
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Wow, I can totally relate, I think a lot of readers can.
Thank you for sharing this piece, its wonderful (:
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