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Out of Control Emotions

So much going on,
in this head of mine.
So many questions,
so little time.

Many complex thoughts,
moving 100 miles an hour.
Just wish they'd slow down,
so I could make sense of them.

At times I just want to cry,
others I want to scream,
but I can't do anything.
Except sit and think.

Even thinking is pointless,
at lease nowadays.
It's not like I am short on thoughts,
there's just too many to sort through!

I'm not even sure words could describe,
just how I am feeling.
It's a mixture of so many emotions,
I can't even list them all!

So much going on,
in this head of mine.
So many questions,
so little time.

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  • i can totally relate i have always had all these thoughts in my head i think about a lot of things some of them dont even matter i wouldn't change anything about this poem thank you for sharing


  • Oh.My.Juliet
    August 16

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    Wow, I can totally relate, I think a lot of readers can.
    Thank you for sharing this piece, its wonderful (:

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