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Devil's Queen Now

ONE DAY AS I WAS WALKING DOWN THE STREET TO THE STORE
I MET A BOY WHO NEVER LIED.WE TALKED
A WHILE WE FLIRTED FOR AN HOUR,AS
I TURNED TO LEAVE I TURNED AROUND AGAIN TO ASK HIM WHO HE WAS.HE REPLIED;"THE DEVIL."I TOLD HIM HE WAS LYING AND TOLD HIM TO PROVE IT.
HE TOKE ME DOWN BELOW
TO HIS LAIR WHERE I NOW SIT TO HIS LEFT,AS
HIS QUEEN.WHERE I GREET THE NEW DAMNED SOULS,
AND LOOK INTO MY BLOOD-RED ORB AND GRANT
POWERS TO THOSE WHO SEEK REVENGE ON
FAMILY OR PAST LOVERS.OH,I STILL REMEMBER THE DAYS WHEN I WAS CAREFREE,(I'M STILL YOUNG OF COURSE),LIFE WAS A TRAIN-WRECK
LIVED FOR EVERY DAY AND MET A NEW ADVENTURE,
BUT NOW MY LIFE IS WONDROUS BECAUSE
I'M THE




   DEVIL'S QUEEN NOW!!

Author notes

THIS SHOULD TEACH YOU NOW THAT WHEN YOU'RE PARENTS SAY DON'T TALK TO STRANGERS THEY MEAN IT,I MEAN LOOK WHAT HAPPENED TO ME!!I TALKED TO THIS BOY I DIDN'T KNOW AND IT TURNS OUT IT WAS THE DEVIL AND NOW I'M HIS QUEEN.
Written March 27th, 2004

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  • Poems
    March 27, 2004
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    beauty is in the eye of the beholder

    HA!!sorry it's a habit,i'll try not to in the future!!


  • March 27, 2004
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    Why did you do it in CAPITALS????? Its annying! Good poem!