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The pretty side of love

You s/crape/d my broken heart off the cold floor

Built the pieces back up

Stuck me together with CrAzY glue

 

You shaded my dark gaze over in a pale pink.    ♥   Color of love

Sent my ♥ into little fits of joy

Warming my body from fingers to toes

 

Shared smiles, the innocence of new love

Whispers of sweet talk and blush filled comments

Never far a-p-a-r-t

 

Everyday the glue falls away replaced by

a bond of love, unbreakable, & irrevocable

Together as one

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  • fairy princess k
    August 26

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    Hey . k

    kool poem =), good use of imagery , i like it because it is something light and nice for once ,it's brilliant to read , wonderful k.
    byyyyyyyyyyye k


  • beautiful.obsession
    August 14
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    wow i loved this. makes me think if someone hehe great write!