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Book Of Life

Sun comes up
turning page
another day writ
on center stage.

Life-time of fun
seems over before begun.

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  • Lyrically N Gaged
    July 30
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    This is great.


  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    July 27

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    So True! The breviety of life is simular to this poem, a few well placed lines & phrases and it's over...on to the next!
    Thoughtfulness in a well structured economy of words. Write on my friend!

    Dennis


  • islekine gold member
    July 26
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    Creative...

    and unfortunately...oh so true!
    Thanks for entering!
    Best wishes in the contest...and always!
    Write on!

    and


  • true.romance
    July 26
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    Love your poem and take on the prompt. Good luck!


  • pineapple-eyes gold member
    July 26
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    Happy Happy


  • penman gold member
    July 26
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    Wonderful

    Very creative take on the prompt. So very true. Best of luck in the contest.

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