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Final Farewell

Across tear covered pages
my pen scratches these final words.

"My heart now in pieces
still belongs to you."

Author notes

prompt:: manuscript

A contest entry

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  • islekine gold member
    July 26
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    Wonderful take!

    Thanks for entering!
    Best wishes in the contest...and always!
    Write on!

    and


  • glenn shannon silver member
    July 26
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    ooh short and sweet qiute brilliant with few words i like


  • pineapple-eyes
    July 26
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    ouch thats a stinger......


  • BluesMan gold member
    July 26
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    This has to be the shortest and most beautiful suicide note ever written. I love it.


  • penman gold member
    July 26
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    Wonderful

    a great take on the prompt. best of luck in the contest

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