So Tired Of Screaming,
My Lungs Are About To Burst,
So Tired Of Bleeding,
It's Getting So Much Worse.
Haunted By Visions Of The Past
My Dreams Were Never Destined To Last
Dawn To Dusk, And Back Again
Fear Melts Like Icy Rain
Memories Of Seraphic Faces
I Breathed Such Heavenly Grace
But, I've Fallen So Far
Deep Into A Wicked Place
Is There No Hope For Me,
Have I Been Alone All Along?
I Feel Fury Towards A False God
Who Claimed To Do No Wrong
And When I Thought All Was Lost,
A Dark Light Came Flooding Through.
I Hear A Different Tune.
I Began Life Anew.
As If Reborn Blood Flows
Through These Veins Of Mine
I Felt A Change In My World,
A Change In Time
The Music Begins
With A Million Deadly Sins
Curiosity Beckoned Me Close
Then The Music Ceased
Pain Was Released
But This Is The Path I Chose
His Deathly Howling
Screaming His Poetic Verses
And I Listening, So Intently
To His Whispered Curses.
His Vampyric Beauty Seems Flawless,
His Voice Is A Ribbon Of Moonlight
His Demonic, Psychotic Laughter
Would Make The Devil Cower In Fright.
And With His Deadly Singing,
The Gothic Music Follows Behind.
All The Other Gorgeous Creatures
That Forever Consume My Mind
And The One That Holds Blue Jaded Eyes
His Fire Burns Me Still
His Long Hair Falls Like Ebony Silk,
With Skin As Pure As Milk.
As He Plays His Riffs Of Fury,
That Make All Hell Break Free,
His Black Lips Constantly Pouting
Whilst The Filthy Beast Is Shouting
They Unbound My Tortured Heart
Yet, Freed A Beast Within
I Look Beyond With No Fear
As I Slaughter My Own Kin
I Lie In The Cradle,
The Cradle Of Filth.
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Comments
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I enjoyed this piece you manage to weave that little bit of fear and horror though it, Strangely i have the song Bat out of hell running through my mind as i read it.
A most enjoyable read
If i was to make one small point it would be That i think it lacks the impact it could have if you did away with the capitals i did find it distracted from a very fine write
This is only my opinion and does not detract from the theme of the poem

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GREAT!! i love it





