As we both
Rest our souls
On this fine
Piece of earth,
Staring deeper
Into the ocean filled
Skies,
We are faced
With the decision
To either remain
Lying on this
Earth,
Or spreading our wings
Like the angels
We are
And soar to our dreams.
We will be
Breaking all bonds
To our surroundings,
Only for us to
Reach our Dreams;
Living the
Life that we
Always wanted to live.
So what do you say?
Just this once,
Let’s spread our wings
And finally leave
This planet
And soar!
Soar all the
Way up
To the ocean filled
Skies
Until we can
No longer see
What used to be called…
Home.
Author notes
I haven't written in a very long time and wanted to see if I still got it. You can interpret this poem any way you can. From lovers traveling to space or lost souls finding home. Whatever you see is what it is. I hope you all enjoy this little write. Oh! Grammar not my strong side so sorry to those who are big about grammar. Thanks!!!!
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luckily for you i spit upon grammar (jk)
no but i really like this one its got a very dreamy feel almost like two lovers just staring into each others souls and finding the missing piece of each other
the other interesting thing is the short lines which to me make me pay more attention to what is being written so that's good too
very well written keep up the good work
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ahh that dream of flying and escape. Always feel free to express yourselve and bring out those feelings in your writing, then worry about the meter and grammar, you can always go back and correct that later as your poetry builds in prominence. For now bring out the emotion. Thanks for sharing and keep writing.
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It could also be....
an LSD trip or a murder suicide pact. I find your work a little choppy with its short lines and lack of meter.....Bob 42
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