Not only exists in Nature
Whose reflections frame her Creations. . .
but
It also reigns within ones heart.
dragonheart1
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A contest entry
- Pictures by SilentPoetress.
550 points, ended August 3, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What beauty do you reflect in your own Life?
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Gorgeous.
Simply gorgeous.
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Your words and the picture are perfect reflections of one another.
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wow. i loved this. its short, but the perfect length for what you were aiming for. it has a wonderful meaning behind it. amazing job and keep up the good work!
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Love it the meaning behind the words are wonderful.
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beautiful! i love what you did here, just lovely and so few words. amazing
keep writing
x
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wow. this is one of the best short poems i have ever read. its very short, yet very powerful. well done.
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So short and simple but such a deeper meaning just beautiful <3
congrats on bronze!
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Beautiful truly beautiful
So true are your words and with the visions we allow our eyes to see and those we place within the mind to look back on it is the very glow about us of the visions we live by that tells our story along the way . Excellent write here
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Beautiful and true words! And the picture you chose is perfect for the words and absolutely gorgeous!!! Pam
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You spelt 'Creations' with a double 'i' you need to take one away!
The words, so short and simple rain down on us with an impact greator than a meateor, do we not make a might pact with Earth, to take from it what we desire and leave it's beauty whole?
To shine even in the darkness, if we should die this very moment what would we fear? Having never known completness like being here, wrapped in the warmth of you? Or, leaving behind this world. It might burn, can't we stay right here till the end of time till the earth stops turning or the sea's run dry...
Brillaint peice, short, sweet, big impact.
All this time we loved you but we never knew your voice, all this time i missed you and searched this human brace is to this and my heart so cold safe in your soul, saved in your sight held by your breathe but we did never know...
Gorecki.
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Although this is indeed short, you have said
so much very beautifully. To me you have
captured its essence very well.
I really appreciate you entering
my contest, thank you.
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