you crush me
with eyes
so full of
'soon she will'
you crush me
with a future
in which I
will not bloom
you crush me
in a book
that will
never be read
you crush me
even though
I am hard
you crush me
even though
you are soft
you crush me
and
my dust
will
break you
Author notes
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A contest entry
- one. loving is asphyxiation. by cirque du soleil.
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Comments
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this is a sad write and i can really feel the emotion. i like your repetition of the phrase "you crush me."
thanks for the entry!! -
Karen
such a long time and no speak.... how are you honey?
You have captured some of my thoughts with this one. Second stanza is painful.
Oh, my, how do you do this? XXXX Debs
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