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Dance among the stars

Dance among the stars
As we mourn the loss of an awe-inspiring  being
A humanitarian
A pop star supreme

Sing now with the angels
So they may be delighted with the gift of your soul
We weren't ready for you, Michael
And the negativity soon took it's toll

Let us remember you as the shining star you were
The beautiful man that gave more than he received
And in the heavens you will be revered...
and never deceived

R.I.P  Michael Jackson

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  • joyfuljossie
    August 17
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    this is a wonderful tribute! He was soul of special sorts; a Mystic Traveller perhaps?


  • Eric Marsh
    July 31

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    dont revise it

    i think this is a lovely fitting tribute,to an icon.i think every generation has its icons and we mourn their passing dreadfully..for it makes our world seem empty and less secure..my icons hendrix and lennon will always be with me as i am sure will yours..keep well....sorry i can't write more but my hands wont obey me,,keep well