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Paint By Number Eyes

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She fell like light into my arms

from a burned out neon sky.


Confusion and wonder shot forth from her paint by number eyes.
We made our way through a city of stone,

with a leap of faith and jumping conclusions, where

 

continual crisis hides behind every smile.


The signs fall strangely despite the shackles and chains on the cooling cerebrum of society.


Where the greeters in the lobbys don't really mean hello,
and reasons are only born to habitual liars.

 

Discord of naked jealousy sails in on brutal lake effect winds, eroding the hands of rhyme, and time no longer matters.

The walls of the living are crumbling, tumbling...

She learned to walk and she ran away.

What are you listening to tonight?

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  • wow.
    Incredible.
    loved the first line probably the best,but it was all great.


  • annother gold member
    July 26
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    Such vivid imagery in this write - LOVE IT! Extremely cool. I have been inspired, thank you.


  • Jesann gold member
    July 26

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    Oh WOW...totally love this.!!!
    An awesome write...lost for words really...so believe me...it's excellent.

    (Listening to the crackling fire...entranced by the dancing flames...as the mind catapults in random directions of thought, and words on spiraling strings..furl & unfurl..till resting in some ethereal suspension) Ha ha !!!!

  • Tonight I'm listening to the cars humming by outside my window.
    This was utterly incredible. I really am blown away, the way that this all just tied together was amazing.
    "We made our way through a city of stone, with a leap of faith and jumping conclusions, where a
    continual crisis hides behind every smile."
    Geez you're incredible...
    Great write Red, keep it up.
    --Katie.


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