Keeper of autumn
She tends to brittle life
Creating the beauty of Fall along the way
Mixing vibrant colors
Painting tree leaves with refining richness
Restoring hope to barren nature
Author notes
Picture prompt
20-40 words
Picture credit: http://sarachmet.deviantart.com/art/Still-Remembering-104189740
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A contest entry
- Yup... it's a Quickie... by kiwigirljacks.
625 points, ended July 26, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Fight to the Final Poetic Death by Blue-Rose Beauty.
409 points, ended July 30, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - PW Contest - 10 LINES or LESS by The Fun House.
600 points, ended August 25, 42 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - silver IV by Salty Hibiscus.
550 points, ended October 11, 72 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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What I like best about this piece is the metaphoric quality of it; the diversity. You can easily take it as literal, which is beautiful or delve further and see the essence of mother nature herself or the Goddess/God Souce pivoting here. I found the imagery captivating even without the image atop of the page. Excellent piece.
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Beautiful, vibrant poem.
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Excellent
Such a great write. So very creative and well expressed. Congratulations on the honorable mention.
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Wow
Really nice while still subtle. I had some real The Handmaids Tale feelings there, is it only the picture
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pretty picture painted by your poem. nice.
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Niiice
Good write, hon. -
Keeper of Autumn, I like that. Interesting take on the prompt.
Mariana
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I really like the thought of her being Autumn's Keeper! Bringing things back to life with richness... great take!
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Amazingly beautiful.
Good luck! (:
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beautiful.
I wish you the best.
Love,
jin
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