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Australia

when i wake up.
with the sunlight
and i'm looking at the ceiling.
i hold my head for a little while
and thats when i see you.
i dont remember how i thought you were beautiful.
and how you thought i was your only love now gone.

i should ran from you.
when i saw that you were waking up.
it was never going to be over
in your eyes.
what do i have to do to get rid of you.
i will be better on my own.
now i miss my guy.
but as long im with you
it's just another bloody day in australia.
yep. just another bloody day in australia.

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what i was bored. ^-^

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  • slicedman
    August 3

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    New Zealand

    Every morning when I wake up.
    With the daylight
    And I'm looking at the windows.
    I stretch my body for a little while
    And thats when I seek you.
    I couldn't remember how beautiful of my love muse.
    And how you stand by me and now you are gone.

    I should have hold you tide.

    When I saw you were around.
    It was never mean to be over.
    In your dove eyes.
    What do i do? How do you do? 
    It will never be the same.
    Now I miss my 15 years old girl.
    But as long as you are there.

    It's just another rainy day in New Zealand.
    Yep. Just another rainy day in New Zealand.


    • kel dog
      August 3
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      haha so cute. your good. another good write from ya.

  • Hmmm sweetie this is quite an interesting poem. I couldn't figure out why you labeled your poem Australia at first then I saw the ending and understood why. well to me this poem was base dupon you lookin into a mirror and talkin' to yourself and analyzin yourself and tellin yourself whatcha need to hear ect. and then reading further along you were like tryin' to tell yourself that you still need him and want him in your life but then again you probably deserve someone better. any ways thats myt ake on it sweetie whether I be right or wrong I still you and anyways keep up the god work as always sweetie.

    Ap Dad Tiger


    • kel dog
      July 26
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      nah. i changed a little bit of the lirics to a song i know. just a bit of fun.