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Why Should I Get Gold?

Why should I win gold you ask?
Well, I shall tell you.

I believe I am a very good writer,
And that should be a reason
Also, I am a lover not a fighter
And that, too, could be good

Also, I haven't won but 3 trophies
Just one gold
So I believe I should have a trophy
If only just to hold

I am a nice person
Trying to befriend everyone
My personality could win gold
I love you all a ton

In case you haven't seen
I can rhyme on a dime
I am a normal teen
With a dream of writing
Maybe a gold trophy could encourage me?

You see, this is why I should win gold
I really want this trophy
And if you had a smidgen of a heart
You would award me, I hope-y

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7-25-09

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  • l0ve
    August 4

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    The end made me laugh And I like how you used positive re-enforcement as opposed to begging or threats...

    Thank you for entering!

  • sleepinglion
    July 26
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    Well I think I agree with you
    you seem to know a rhyme or two
    Best of luck
    david