Out of the shadows in my nameless dreams
Came the knock-knock-knocking and who could it be's?
Of a midnight soldier all dressed in white
Casting a glow of n'er did wrong in his life.
Do I fall for those lips that taste passion fruit sweet?
Teeter on the edge of the cliff that I leap?
Should I try to see past the clouds covered my mind?
Why look back when this tryst is my doorway through.
Existance is a game I'd not dare to play
If your heart would stop beating to show me the way.
For deep in tick tock and cheshire cats
There's a world dipped in acid forever after that
Would capture my sunshine in frosted glass vials
To whisper our love song through crystallized isles,
To all the lost souls who strive to know why
In wonderland alone i'm alive in your eyes.
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love
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a good poem, ah love, it does bring life to eyes and the heart swirls through wonder and beauty, like a dream we slip across imagery and land with a smile in the spirit of hope.
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something so beautiful from a poet of your caliber speeds my heartbeat and leaves me breathless . . . thank you for such kind words<3
Makae Mae
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wow you have written a great piece. love it. such a fantastic and it is beautiful. great way to say the last stanza. captured my heart.
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thank you so much for your beautiful comment . . . to say the least it warms my heart<3
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