tea cup-
sits on my unfinished poem
mid-summer’s rain
Author notes
form; modern
Haiku/Senryu
In a list
A contest entry
- Tea Ku' by azure85.
1750 points, ended August 8, 30 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I try to be concise when I write my Haiku, always open for suggestions
Comments
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Lovely ku. Like the way you've crafted it!All the best in the contest.
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thank you for reading and commenting..also the applause
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yes !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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thanks hun
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Oh, wonderful AHA moment and so much is described within your three lines. A very polished haiku, I thank you so much for taking tea with me.
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Beautiful. I like the empty waiting, the receptive stance found in your tea cup. It is placed over your work while you take a break or get distracted by a welcomed shower - a if it might be a begging bowl, an open prayer - Fillin with image, sound and many connections.
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marlene this comment is very perceptive to the thoughts it had been written..and I love how you have inscribed your interpretation to it with such poetic reserve...and I would ponder them in use in your own haiku
thanks for dropping by sweetie
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always such an impact
how do you do
amazing Haiku
God bless you Mal...
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I honestly dont know...sometimes they come to me in such a way that even I go wow...lol
ive written many...but only a few to me are satisfactory...I happen to love this one though
for you
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Ooooh, I like the tea, poetry and season all blending their own particular flavors into this poem. Good mix for sure! Good for sipping on while pondering.
Dennis
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thanks for dropping in dennis...its an honor
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Ok.....hands down.....best KU' ths far
I always enjoy what you bring to your few sylls.....makes me ponder and wonder how much you said with so few words.....your visual is excellent and the movement....even quite slow...is quite powerful .....great job here.....good luck i this contest!
Bear -
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you're to kind Bear if only the host would find this to be the case... I love writing these little wonders...and continually try to advance myself to master something thought so simple but so hard to do
where is yours by the way?
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i'll join you for a cup if you invite me over
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umm you make it hard for me to say no...
bring your nightie
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Ohhhhh! I've been on this contest for an hour trying desperately to come up with something.. Noticed you entered so I came
to find inspiration lovely haiku!! Ohh I do admire such a
tranquil write! What better time to have tea
than during a light shower.. I'm thinking patio... Old tea set.. And perhaps a fav book? Sighh lovely imagery I got from this
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well Xin you're ready to roll...already you have the inspriation and thoughts pending..go write one of your own
Im sure it will be a winner oh and thanks for your ever so kind words on my poetry, you are just too sweet
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