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Eyeliner Lies

Thick black lines
scorch under your eyes.
War paint covers
your natural beauty.
What seems fine
marks up your face.
Lying to protect
the truth inside.

Author notes

(when i was writing the title I accidently put Eye liver lol)
I wrote this because I hate when people put a ton of makeup on. That annoys me a lot.
If you were makeup, make it the right amount.(i sometimes wear makeup!)

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  • SmartBrick
    August 12
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    LOVE IT!!!!!!!!


  • Lost in a Dreamstar
    August 9
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    I liked it Celeste!


  • AuburnBlessing
    July 26

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    This is good. Short, sweet, and bitter. My only complaint is that you spelled "lying" wrong in the second to last line. Other than that, I liked it.


  • nichtmich silver member
    July 26

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    Very inciteful! You make me think of someone using make up as a mask to hide who they really are....or try to be something they're not! I LOVE the title (glad you caught the typo ). Kudos!!!


  • Darklordkya
    July 25

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    I totaly get what you mean. I know a lot of people who cake it on like they will never be able to wear it again. I like how short and sweet it is. Good luck in the contest!

    <3Anna

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