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Tonight, I Fell

I watched the rain glisten
Sparkling around your head
Like a golden hallow
I wished to see in the morning light

My body was weak
Hand shaking as I reached
Only to grasp at a fantasy
Of my dreams

Now I will wait
For all to see
What truth can become of this
If reality will sink

Picture perfect
In every wanted memory
Days spent laughing
Careless and free

Your hands feel
Too real to be true
It almost hurts
To ask if your my angel

But the bliss
Held inside your kiss
Tells me of gentle passion
From a growing fondness

Butterflies...

Tonight
I might
Fall for you

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  • Quite obvious what prompt you used, congrats on making that clear
    I liked this... it shows how quickly you can fall in love.
    It made me feel.
    The last few lines gave me butterflies
    xoxo.