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Humanity's Pilgrimage

Alas!  Lights are
to few,                          and far.
    Age has worn,
my soul
thin from walking;
          (searching, stressing senses.)

Longer still,
                  is my trek.

Soon,
        I hope,
the day will come
When I no longer
    explore in this lonesome darkness,

and awake to the Sun
warming my Pasture.




Author notes

The Pasture, is a song/poem about true love.
Can't really write about a relationship and be optimistic. (Ain't got nothing to be optimistic about.) Hope this fits your prompt.

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