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House of the living dead

There is a darkness among me
as i linger up the haunted stairwell.
Like this place
has a greater being among it.

There are ghosts above me
and spiders at my feet
there is green slime
dripping from the walls.

As i go up
my head fills with dark thoughts
of murder and destuction
and there is an eerie organ playing
in my ears.

suddenly i here a shrill voice
that tunes out all other sounds.
I have entered
the house of the living dead.

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  • Agrona
    July 27

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    Hmm...

    This was very interesting. I like the way it told a story. It was well written and flowed nicely with the tale you told.

    Good luck to you,
    ~Sera