Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Say Your Peace

Do not look for me here
I am already gone
My departure happened swiftly
For the coming took too long

Along the shore I walked
Staring out to sea
Knowing all along I was alone
But, I just wanted to be free

And yet here you are
Reading this I thought to leave
What was I thinking, that I could
In any way "keep breathing"?

Author notes

in this sense, for me, to "breathe" is to write for AP... don't know how much longer I will do this. lol. This place is malignant... it just keeps growning on me, and sometimes not in the healthiest of ways.

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

  • say your peace, is that a play on words! a good piece! In any way "keep breathing"? - breathing?" - that aside, i am here now as you waved an hello to me then in a comment. wow - to "breathe" is to write for AP... - come on is ap the be end... but i do realise how addictive this site is. when i arrived i had a library of poetry to post and have learnt loads since i have been here, i love this site in equal measure as i hate it