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Don't. Please.

Don't look,
Don't touch,
Don't ask.
I'm not okay.

Critical as you can, please.

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  • sgking123 silver member
    September 20

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    wow

    you depict your tuchiness so well... you prohibit people from doing the three main things tahtwe all do commonly...this meansyou really really wanna be left alone...a pretty nice little peom..Pls visit me and comment em as well